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Very powerful. Nice work.

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founding

A wonderful short, and as all good ones do, makes me want to know more. Keep them coming.

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I really enjoyed this. Your style is smooth and enjoyable to read. And that last line...dang. Sharing this!

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Very glad that you enjoyed the story, Winston! I appreciate the comments and the share. I tried to enter it your contest at @thestoryletter back when it was oisted - hopefully I did it correctly the first time. Enjoy your weekend!

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You entered correctly, Chris!

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Nice - reminds me of an old Twilight Zone story. Stellios should have gotten his sight check after his brother died but maybe he just wanted the pension!

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